Elevator Pitch 22A
Elevator Pitch 22A
Reflection: The two main constructive criticisms that stood out to me was my eye contact and my gestures. They said keeping eye contact is important and my gestures were cut off. I tried fixing both by memorizing the pitch as well as stepping back. I tried to go slow so my message came across smoothly, as well as, keeping my body still. The only other criticism was that my audio was low. Since I was using an iPhone to record, I tried speaking louder.
Throughout this process I believe my pitch has become easier and more fluid.
This was a great pitch and felt like a huge improvement over the last one. Your eye contact was great and most of your gestures were visible. The volume level was better than the last video but I still had a little bit of a problem hearing you. As you said in your post, it's probably because of the iPhone so its not really a problem with you.
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