Elevator Pitch No. 2
Elevator Pitch No. 2 2. The feedback I received was more of product feedback, rather than personal feedback. The person liked my idea and thought it would be extremely useful. Going back over my first pitch I noticed a few things that I though should be corrected. The first was the rate at which I talked. I seemed to go fast in parts making it hard to understand. Another criticism was my lack of eye contact. I tried to fix that by looking more into the camera. It was a however a challenge due to the phone being lower then I was. A thing I should try and fix for the next pitch would have to be the movement. I seem to be moving my shoulders a lot, distracting to the viewer.